>>1037398
She glided to the pillows I had placed on the floor in hopeful preparation, knelt down and beckoned to me. I don't remember how I got across the room, I was just there, with her in my arms. I was frenzied, I wanted to touch, to taste every inch of her. She must have sensed my desire becoming frantic because she cupped my face with her hands, gave me a gentle kiss and pushed me back onto the cushions.
The heat from her body made me gasp as she straddled me, the skin of her thighs so smooth against my hips.
When I slipped, throbbing, into her I thought I might die. My heart was pounding so fiercely I didn't know how much more I could take. I was determined to find out. My life would end one day in any case and I couldn't imagine a better way to leave it.
She moaned, the first sound I had heard her utter, as she surged against me. I couldn't hold on any longer and I wondered if she would allow me to climax this time. She quickened her pace, her lithe body stiffening. I came, an explosive orgasm that seemed to last forever. I strained against her, my pelvis thrust upward, pulling her onto me with my hands on her hips. She let out a cry like nothing I have ever heard before or since, something like the shriek of an eagle overlaying the sound of her ecstasy.
At that moment, I realized something was wrong.

I bet you forgot to take pics of her naked.

>>1037403
newfag, it's creepypasta

>>1037401

I looked up at her, smiling down at me, a self-satisfied look on her beautiful face. A face that began to change...
I was paralyzed, dread overcoming me. Her eyes sunk back into their sockets which grew dark and bruised. Her skin, once so fresh and young, began to wither and wrinkle. I wanted to scream but the only sound that would escape my lips was a faint croak. Her white teeth elongated, becoming needle-like as her lips shriveled away to nothing. I suddenly noticed the painful rushing sensation that was coursing through my body, seemingly from every point, centering on the place that this creature's disgusting body was joined with mine. It felt as though my entire being ached with cold. The succubus leaned forward on my chest, her horrible stinking mouth inches from my own and whispered.
"Delicious."
I lost consciousness then.

>>1037411
When I awoke, I was lying in a hospital bed, tubes and wires attached to every part of me. I tried to ask the nurses why I was here and why everything hurt. My voice sounded strange, wheezing and faint. They wanted to know my name but when I told them they shook their heads and asked me to try and remember -my- name. I was so confused by this that it took me a moment to answer. When I repeated my name one of the nurses sat down next to me and held my hand.
"No, hon. That's the name of the man who's apartment they found you in. Keep trying to remember -your- name. We need to know it so we can find your family."
"I don't have any family. I just want to get out of here." I tried to sit up but I was so weak and all of my joints creaked and protested.
"Hey, slow down there, sweetheart. You are very sick, you need to stay in that bed for now. Maybe in a couple of days I can ask the doctors if I can wheel you around the facility. How's that?" She smiled at me as though I was a retarded child, the same way she had been talking to me.
"Listen to me, you stupid bitch. I'm not an idiot and I want you to tell me what's wrong with me, now!" The nurse frowned slightly but nodded her head.
"You're just having some trouble with that old ticker of yours, darlin. We'll have you feeling better in no time. For a man who's gettin up there in years, you're pretty healthy."
"What kind of crap are you trying to pull, lady? I just turned 31 two weeks ago, I'm younger than you!" She looked sad and walked over to a side table. She pulled a hand mirror out of a drawer and came back to the bedside.
"Here, hon. Look for yourself. I think you are just a little confused right now."

>>1037413
I held the mirror in a hand that was reluctant to follow my commands. I had to hold the mirror very close to my face before I could make out my reflection. I was stunned at what I saw.
My face was like melted candle wax, it was covered in blotches and age spots. My hair was white and thin. The intense blue eyes I remembered were now milky from cataracts. I dropped the mirror, to overcome to do anything but try to keep breathing. A squeezing pain gripped my chest.
I was an old man. The succubus had taken my youth and left me to die slowly in a place where everyone thought I was senile.
It's been two years since the night I summoned her, the second heart attack led to a stroke and now I am mostly paralyzed. Locked into this body wracked with pain, typing this story out laboriously with one finger. I don't have anything better to do and maybe my story will be read and remembered so that I won't be completely forgotten.
You will remember me, won't you?

>>1037401
FUCK THAT.

She could turn into swampfaggot on acid and that shit would still be worth it in my opinion. Words have never put me so close to fapping before.

Wow. The poor succie must've been starving, to drain him out in one go. Maybe she was bulimic.

>>1037414
Why didn't he summon that bitch up again so he could get some sex AND die.


I don't like this creepypasta :|

>>1037429
"the second heart attack led to a stroke and now I am mostly paralyzed."
I don't think he was up to it...

Hay OP:

Enjoy your thousand demon babies.

>>1037432
Then one-finger-suicide seems like a via option. Or maybe he could look into becoming a Incubus.

>1037438
viable*

>>1037429
It seems like most people on this board don't like my writing. I'm not sure what I'm doing that is so different from the thousands of other stories you guys drool over...*Sigh*
I'm sorry you didn't like it, I'll try to do a better job next time.

>>1037443
I enjoyed it.

>>1037443
Its more "omfg hott" than creepy.
Less erotic maybe?

>>1037443
don't bother. Really.

>>1037450
Im not OP but I didn't think it was meant to be creepy. I thought it was meant to be horror witch is slightly different.

>>1037415
>>1037429
>>1037450
If it wasn't meant to be creepy, then never mind. It was a great story but not creepy.

>>1037446
Thank you. I enjoyed writing it.

>>1037467
I'd like to see more.

>>1037470
You're sweet, thanks. I'll put up the next story when I have the time. Any suggestions on premise?

>>1037415
7chan's mostly a shithole, but you should visit /elit/.

>>1037472
Anything, really. Try throwing in a bit more terrifying aspect, if you want the approval of more /x/philes. I, personally, found this story quite intriguing, and frantically f5'd. But, if this is your strong-suit, more demon-related stories would be awesome.

>>1037398
>>1037401
*fap-fap-fap*

>>1037478
Work in a parody of stiltwalker.

>>1037478
I've written a couple of other ones for /x/ that were more focused on creepy. I could post them if you like. Two of them are very short because I was trying to let the readers use their imaginations and besides we all know how tl;dr happy alot of 4channers are, lol.

>>1037488
Please do post them. And, yeah. Write a story about myself. Stiltwalker.

>>1037492
I'll give it a try. I hope I remember the salient details of your story well enough. Is the stiltwalker thread archived?
Here's the first:

Dreams are just your mind dealing with the days events, aren't they?
Of course, there -are- places you visit often in your dreams. A certain house, a shop, a school...But these places are just figments of your imagination, right?
Have you ever wondered about these places and the people within them?
We know you're out there, "lucid dreamers", the ones who can control events as they dream. You are just beyond that film, that membrane that seperates us.
Lucid Dreamer, have you ever wondered what that beautiful woman in your dream felt when you suddenly decided you wanted to have sex with her? Oh, she seemed willing enough, didn't she?
Have you ever considered that you raped that woman, Lucid Dreamer? That she had no choice but to do everything you willed her to do while her mind watched on in horror and hatred?
Remember, Lucid Dreamer, all those awful things you have done in your dreams...and consider what those who call dreams their home must think of you. What they wish to do to you in kind.
We are waiting, Lucid Dreamer, for those nights when your exhaustion keeps you from your power. Oh, the things we will do to you then.
Sweet Dreams.

Next:

I know you.
I've watched you look at photographs of maiming and murder. I've smiled while you stared raptly at the videos of sudden, bloody death.
My cold hand was on your shoulder as you did these things, as you convinced yourself that there was no harm in looking.
'Lots of people look at things like this', you told yourself, 'it doesn't make me a bad person.'
My long black tongue slipped unfelt across your face as you became more and more fascinated by the suffering you saw.
No, enjoying those things doesn't make you a bad person...
It just makes you a very good meal.

>>1037506
That was your story? Awesome.

All I did was save a picture. I keep coming back to that. I have a hard time wrapping my mind around it.
The only thing I did to deserve this is save a picture from a paranormal site...
What's ironic is that I have always felt uneasy when I decided that a pic had something interesting enough in it to save to my "paranormal" folder. Like whatever was in the photograph could be passed to me that way. Ha! I always told myself I was being superstitious and silly.
I was so naive.
I don't know how long I will be allowed to enjoy my newfound wisdom, but I will leave a record so that maybe other people will trust their instincts and not have to know the creeping dread I face now.
I've read so many creepypastas and horror novels, seen scary movies by the dozens. Nothing prepared me. Every time I hear a noise, a scrap, a rattle, I'm sure that this is it. I've finally reached the final moment of my life. But no, it never ends.
I constantly see it's face...when I close my eyes, in my dreams, out of the corner of my eye, even if I walk around a corner too quickly I see it for a moment, then it vanishes with that horrible smile. That stretched, wrong smile.

>>1037516
The dreams are so vivid I can't tell I'm asleep until...until it starts touching me. Sliding it's long hands up my thighs, squeezing the meat there. Gently brushing across my belly and cupping my breasts. Oh yes, it can be gentle. It...plays with me. I never know when the pain will come, or the pleasure. The pleasure is the worst. The shame I feel, it's indescribeble. How can my body betray me that way? It taunts me in that deep, inhuman voice. It tells me, as it thrusts it's pelvis against mine, how I will die. How it will end me. This thing is very imaginative and I can't help but wonder how many times it has done this before. Every night it comes up with a new, inventive way to murder me and whispers it in my ear as it rapes me. I'm afraid it's changing me. Possessing me in every sense of the word.
The day brings no relief. I constantly hear footsteps coming closer, but when I whip my head around to face what may come there is never anything there. The shadows move in strange ways. When I look at a mirror my reflection is...odd. The way it seems to take a moment before doing what I do, the slight smirk on my face even though I know I'm not smiling.
Animals won't come near me now, they shy away like I might hurt them if I even glance their way. They can feel it there, like I can, watching. I don't know what it's waiting for...but the animals don't want to be there when the waiting is over. I don't either.
I've thought about suicide, I can't seem to stop thinking about it these days but I haven't been able to take that final step.
I...I can feel it's hand on my shoulder. Oh, god...It's so cold. Someone help me.

All good stories, but I'm going to sleep now. I hope the thread's still around tomorrow.

>>1037514
Thanks. I try to write about what frightens or worries me. Part of the reason sex features so prominantly in my stories is because there is alot of fear and guilt wrapped up in it. I can't think of something more horrifing than to be intimate with creepy-looking entity that has complete power over you.

>>1037529
Waking up next to one, don't get married.

>>1037534
LOL
It's too late, I'm already married, but thanks for the advice.

>>1037443
You seem to be tryong to hard waht with all that there vo CAB Ulary

>>1037543
Are you implying that my large vocabulary is a hinderance to my writing ablility? ;)
My husband has always said I speak like I have a thesaurus in my head. I don't mean to. I think I just read too much and coming from a family of readers I was raised under the assumption that everyone thinks, writes and speaks this way. Boy, was I surprised.
Anyway, good night all.

>>1037450
Uhmm, you want a story about a sex demoness to be less erotic? I think you might be missing the point.

I liked your stories OP, any more would be very appriciated.

bump

Wow...

>>1037516

Last sentence "Stretched, wrong smile."

Doesn't fit. Try distorted or mis-shapen.

"Wrong" just doesn't fit with the overall language of the piece.

So, how much did it set you back?


I figure a hooker willing to try something like this(let alone with the talent to pull it off) would cost somewhere over two hundred bucks.

bump
I can't let this die before she comes back with moar yummy pasta!

>>1037896
That's all you have to say to OP after he/she writes this many great stories? Not even a 'nice work but I noticed...'etc.? This is why we can't have nice things. This person spent their time and energy to write this for /x/ and all they get is /b/ crap and critisism?
OP I like the way you write, don't listen to these idiots. Please continue to post, okay?

>>1038101

Can you be any more whiny?

more

Bumping. Good stories are good.

>>1038101

I feel the other comments in this thread let the OP know whether their work is any good.

But with all the fairly dramatic/descriptive language something like that stands out. It will make it flow better. All the artists I know don't want millions of "OMG THIS IS SO GEWD", what they want is constructive criticism to let them know how to make it better.

And yes I feel that this creepy pasta is good. Just little things...

OP I quite enjoy the eloquence of your writing style. You've got a great talent so keep with it.

>>1037432
HAHAHAHAHA

Has anyone seen wulfslove around yet today? I need moar!

You're my favourite writer on /x/, OP. I mean that.
I was thrilled when you revealed your earlier works.
I remember and love those.

>>1037398
intriguing narrative, clansman

To summon a Succubus:

First, you need two slices of bread. It doesn't matter if it's white or 80% Whole Wheat or Hearty Choice with nuts and seeds, any kind will do.
Then, you'll need to gather a good handful of gravel. the gravel should ideally be made up of rocks about half an inch in diameter.
Spread the gravel on one slice of bread and put the other slice on top, so you have just made a gravel sandwich.
Take your gravel sandwich with you to any swimming pool, and jump in the deep end. Eat your gravel sandwich whilst treading water and making a consistent humming noise.
Your succubus will be waiting for you outside the swimming rink in a red 1993 Toyota Corolla.

>>1038581
And how do I get back the kia she stills?

>>1037415

get a hooker, you virgin moron. that is the answer to all the basement dwelling weirdos who dream about this stuff. it's a hell of a lot quicker and it will actually work

le bump

wow same shit happened to me but I got the tail up my pooper true story

>>1038676you must be so proud

I encountered a succubus. It was as you said, OP...Only, I hesitated when she beckoned to me. As tempted as I was, I was more afraid of her than I was aroused by her. As if she sensed this...Her body faded away into a serpentine one, and her face was as you described.

Now I don't dream anymore. In fact, for a long time, I was very numb to everything I enjoyed. It was like she took away my ability to feel pleasure, I still masturbated, but I couldn't feel anything. 6 months later, I'm finally able to start enjoying music again.

As I'm typing this, I feel as if a needle is being driven into me.

>typing this story out laboriously with one finger.
Mental imagery. Hilarious.

>>1038706

So don't boast.

Thanks so much to all of you that have posted encouraging comments, it really makes me feel more confident in my writing ability. I don't think I'll ever be able to stop writing but I was beginning to consider keeping my stories to myself to avoid the flaming.
I'm working on a new story but I don't have a lot of time this week, I'll post it as soon as I can.

>>1038706
Are you serious or just adding to the tale?
My story was completely fictional, I've never met a succubus (unless you believe my fucked up paternal family) and I've certainly never attempted to summon one.
If this truly happened to you, I'm sorry. Especially if my writing brought back any bad memories.

>>1038849Are you serious or just adding to the tale?

facepalm.jpg

>>1038849

Hell, you're about as cute as they come.

>>1038866
What do you mean? How was that response 'cute'?

>>1038893

Ah you're just polite, sweet, and you communicate well.
Rare traits recently.

NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER

saged. Porn goes on /b/.

>>1038923

Porn? Please.
If it contains mature themes, it isn't paranormal. Is that it?
Nice.

>>1038909
Thanks. I don't see any reason to be rude to people, even if it is common practice on 4chan. I think most people act that way because they think they're supposed to, but if the customs of 4chan are dictated by 4channers then we can change that attitude.

heh, rare traits indeed.

Honestly, your stories are fascinating, they make me want to start writing again, but i do not have the time, so many great ideas, not enough time to express them properly.

You are as good as a professional writer, honest, if you actually have any books published i would not hesitate to buy them, and if you don't, well, i think it's time to start writing.

fuck 4chan, use your writing for something better.

NIGGERS
NIGGERS
NIGGERS

>>1038958
>>1038966

samefag or a pathetic moron.

the writing in this is no better than the rest of the harry potter fan fiction club out there.

>>1038969

Knock knock.

>>1038923
You are too young to be on 4chan, I think. A short horror story is not pornography. There are many other threads that truly contain /b/ material that would be better served with your sage.

>>1038975BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWW

Butthurt detected. Story sucks. You're probably one of the freaks fapping to this shit. Pull your head out of your ass. You're no better than anyone else on /b/. This story is mediocre cheap porn fiction at best. It's like the cross-over stories with Sonic having sex with Shamus or some nonsense. Utter garbage.

>>1038979

Okay, we heard you. Do you really need to continue?

>>1038966
Thank you! I'm very flattered. I have considered attempting to get my work published but I haven't been able to find the courage as of yet. I'm posting in /x/ not only to contribute to a board I love but also to desensitize myself. If I can learn to handle the harsh criticism that /x/ can dish out, then maybe I will be able to face it in the real world as well.

>>1038969
I know that my work needs polish and I will never stop trying to improve my skills, however I don't think that my writing is on the same level as teenage fan fiction. I'm not posting as other people either, self-praise would be worthless to me. I'm not sure why you are so hostile but for your sake I hope you learn to relax a little.

I liked it.It's better than I could do, honestly, and I'm a writing major.

>>1039048

Ditto and ditto.

>>1039048
>>1039055
Thank you both.
Do you have any creepy stories you've written that you'd like to share? I love reading horror and it's especially fun to be able to talk about the story with the author.

You could have hired a prostitute and it would have been a lot cheaper and easier.

LOL INB4 MORRIGAN FROM DARKSTALKERS

>>1038849
I don't know what magic it is that actually makes a story good, but I do know that you are not far off the mark.

I also know that>>1037506is the only one I will be saving for my creepypasta collection.

>>1037516
>>1037518
>>1037411
One thing is for sure, you have a knack for killing boners.

>>1039144
Thats why its scary, lol.

>>1037414

Maybe I would if you told me your name.

Tis is good and all, except youre fucking a giant rat with wings and NOT a nice set of hips.
see also "fucking a pidgeon"

enjoy your super-succubus-aids

Very nice writing, I love the style.

>>1039112

Unfortunately what I've got so far aren't too creepy or horrific.
A little mindfucky, but not enough so to be worth posting here.
Seeing your writing though, maybe I'll set myself on something.

>>1039201
Thank you. That's very nice to hear.

>>1039252
Awesome! I look forward to reading your work.

man dont listen to these haters i really liked the story looking forward to your next work!

i came

bump-everyone should read this

>>1038581
Id summon the succubus if only for the corolla

keepin it alive for OPs return!

hey, has this been archived yet?

>>1040541
At 4chanarchive? I don't think it should be. We have creepypasta.com and scp-wiki.wikidot.com, which are just fine for individual pastas, as opposed to creepypasta dumps.

Very nice. Keep writing OP. I look forward to any more

>>1038581
I did what this fucking fag said and i shat bricks. but no succubus! fuck you fag!

You guys have the lowest standards ever. The sluts of the literary world.

>>1040554
I agree with you. I will submit my stories to creepypasta.com, that's the place for them.

>>1040541
I do however, thank you for reading my work and sharing your enjoyment of it with me.

really shitty story and badly written. another bad porn story lapped up because of the horny under age teens that make up the population here.

sage

>>1040756
I'm sorry that you didn't have fun reading my writing. Although I'm not sure why you didn't just move on to another thread. No one forced you to read it and I don't understand why it bothers you that other people liked it. You didn't give any constructive advice, you simply insulted the taste of those who enjoyed it. Why?

>>1040782
fuck you.

stories were awesome.

>>1040782

Dick. I don't even like the creepypasta around here and I thought it was good.

I'm starting to think the fucktards who keep saying OP's creepypasta sucks are failed writers lol. The green monster rears it's ugly head!
I would like to see more of your stuff as soon as you can get it written, Wolfie my dear. It's too bad you're a married woman, you sound like you'd be a blast in bed, lol.

>>1037513
This one was really good, nice job.

OP's story made me aroused not frightened. But is that a bad thing...

>>1037398
this post right here is what any anon would do to be able to touch a girl.

nice story. not great! but nice.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zUfONVpMn4Q&feature=related

>>1041075
Why are you inserting commercials into /x/?

/support

She touched my pe pe, Steve.

I enjoyed it. Moar please.

>>1041520
?

bump

rescued from page 9 bump!

I had read and liked the lucid dreaming pasta, I didn't know that you had other stuff. Keep writing, they're all very good.

very interesting, aside from the slightly less than scary points. The imagery and descriptiveness gave me the feelings that you tried to bring across, which is always a good thing.

I have only one question:

What did it take? How did you do it?

You should have made it more 4chan-believable...

adding words like Fuck Yeah, or Shit was so cash....

Hey, uh...does anyone know when/if OP is coming back? I'm on here alot and I haven't even seen anyone using the name "wulfslove" for quite a while now. I thought OP was going to post another story...
Did he/she just disapear off the face of the earth? :_(

>>1045954
Yeah. I wanna know too.
OP WHERE ARE YOU?

>>1046053
OP is obviously writing more sexy ass stories, be patient.

>>1046058
I'm not good at patience...and /x/ is filled with racism and fail right now. We could really use some good creepypasta.

>>1046751
Irishfag wrote this:

Oh, well, it involves a specific type of evil spirit. First it appears as an all black cow, two weeks before Halloween. You only see it if a relative has just died. It stands at a great distance, and any attempts to catch it are futile. A week later, as an all black pig, closer. At this point, if you've seen it, you must make a small circle of six stones, and pour sea salt into the middle of it. Then, place a black stone in it, with the name of the dead person, and the names of your father, your mother, and your siblings. Failing to do this, on Halloween, the Cutty Black Sow will find you, and wait for you until you go to sleep. It then eviscerates you, slowly, but you live, until it eats your brain, and carries your soul, and that of the person who died, off to Hell. In most Celtic mythos, the head is the seat of the soul, hence the brain part (and why Celts, and even later Christian Gaels took heads as trophies).

Great story.
Though i fear this might trigger 2 or 3 "I CAN HAS SUPERNATURAL SECKS NAO PLS?" threads within the next days.

>>1037472
Do one on a Shade.
Do you have the creepy pasta with how to summon one? I love that shit.

Good story by the way, just how I like my creepy pasta infact.

>>1046769
http://www.creepypasta.com/the-cigarette/

SAGE

>>1046791
You're sageing -this- thread out of all of the crap that's on /x/ right now? What's your problem? Creepypasta not /x/ enough for you?

. . . this thread is still alive?