>>503971

>>503972

>>503974

The End.

oh god .gif ! no !

>>503977

Don't worry. They're all .jpg

No .gif here.

>>503979

infernal lies

>>503979
Good show! It's very well done. And Mage...just, no. Just no.

I found it entertaining, though I feel it would have been more fitting as the end of a suspense novel, as the main character finally slips into madness after dealing with this condition for the entirety of the story.
As a stand-alone creepypasta, it falls a little short in the creepy factor, simply since I don't have any sympathy for the nameless crazy guy dying alone in a bathroom. It's a good concept though.

>>503985
Yes, I agree. But still, a nice try none the less.

FUCK!! Another goddamn shit story thread on /x/. (Shit is NOT cash). Listen to me OP. YOU
ARE
A
SHITTY
WRITER.
You will always be a shitty writer.
Each and every post that is complimenting the OP is written only by the OP. You're a fucking attention-whore who will never amount to anything.
GO
FUCKING
DIE.

>>503992
Can't spell UNDERAGE without RAGE.

>>503992
Excuse me, but I surely am NOT the OP. I'm weary of this, and wish to sleep. Stop disturbing me and accusing me of writing pasta. I don't write pasta. I write for...other things. Things which, mentioned on /x/, would probably result in a b&. But then again, /x/ does have hentai ads on it...

>>503992

this post is filled with magic!

>>503971
I see cancer has spread to /x/ as well. Good, maybe now this shitsite will finally fucking wither.

>>503992

9/10

Very well executed rage over nothing.

>>503985

I get what you're saying. I didn't want to fill in all the blanks, though. I was trying to write a real journal of someone in that situation. I figured that a personal journal wouldn't be filled with back story, because the writer already knows his own life. I can understand, though, how it might not make for a gripping suspense story since the reader has no idea who he is reading about.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

>>504003
No problem.

Here's the Creepypasta I based the story on, btw... in case you're curious.

If you ever are in an area of absolute quiet, still your breathing and move not a muscle. After a few seconds, you will notice that the silence has a sort of "sound" of its own, a kind of empty ringing tone. This is nothing unique, everyone will hear this, given the proper setting. An informed person will tell you that your brain is trying to interpret the lack of stimuli to your hearing and so creates a bit of a filler sound. This ringing sound actually serves a more arcane purpose, covering up a noise we are not meant to hear. This noise is not impossible to hear, and if you are persistent you can effectively "break" the cover-up sound. The next time you are silent and hear the ringing, shout at the top of your lungs for about half a minute, then be abruptly silent. It will be different for everyone. Some will hear nothing different for dozens of tries. Others might pick up soft murmuring. A special few auditory heroes might clearly make it out on the first attempt.

>>504066

What you will hear is a voice that relays an account of events about to happen in the immediate future. It's like a sportscaster relaying the events occurring 10 seconds into the future. As time goes on, you will be able to make out this voice under increasingly noisy circumstances, to the point that it can be heard at any time by just concentrating. Such an ability would doubtlessly be invaluable, no? You will be able react to any immediate danger, relate to people around you with greater ease. No one would ever surprise you. Now, of course you are wondering what sort of horrible catch this ability entails. Perhaps the tone of the voice is so horrible that it will drive you mad, or maybe the voice will only predict your death over and over again. Of course this isn't the case, though, its a normal voice, your ears receive it no matter what, it's simply a matter of noticing. But there is a danger. For you see, where there is a voice, there is a body. And just like you will notice new sounds, so shall you notice new sights. More importantly, you will be noticed.

>>504068
i really liked the OP's take on this.


PS this creepypasta really creeped me out the first time i read it. even to this day, if things get to quiet, i have to start moving my feet around or humming or something, so it doesn't get so quiet that i hear something else....

>>503971

I liked it. The creepy pasta it's based off is among my more favoured.

It'd be fun to see more stuff like this in /x/

shameless bump for daytime /x/

Like I said, fairly good.

>>504914

thanks again :D

>>504917
No problem whatsoever. I am a writer myself, and quite enjoy the amateur stuff. Because I'm just too broke to go out an buy the new King book.

so what is the thing

is it like

a ghost?

Thanks for the creepypasta. It was delicious.

Real writer here. That was shit. Stop writing. Seriously.

>>Real writer here.

ohhhhhhhhh thanks! I haven't laughed that hard in a loooong time!

>>504944

Well, it's up to the reader to decide. The guy never knew what it was, and I imagine at then end he saw it coming for him, but instead of writing a description of it, he threw the journal out the window.

I always thought of it as a female figure with a head filled with teeth and about a billion tongues, though...